Deep-TrancesTM -- Contest 2003 Entry

Subliminal Seduction

 

Becky worked with me in our office, although in different departments. She worked in legal, and I was in I/T.

 

For about six months we'd been getting closer, and had been out on several dates. We had talked about some fantasies and taking our relationship to the next level. She had told me that she knew something about hypnosis and thought it would be fun to give it a spin.

 

Being a curious type, it sounded very exciting to me. So we made plans to meet on Friday night after work at her place. It was more accommodating as my roommate tended to have some of his friends over on Fridays for booze and whatever.

 

I arrived at her door with my usual fare – a bottle of simple red wine. She made dinner dinner and we caught up on what turned out to be real long weeks for both of us.

 

We took the bottle of wine into the living room with two glasses. After more chatting and most of a bottle of wine, Becky said she had a new CD she wanted us to hear. She strolled over to the player and clicked a few buttons and the player started with that familiar whirrrrr.

 

The music came on and I immediately recognized the tune. But, there was something different...I just couldn't put my finger on it. I closed my eyes for a moment to listen to the tunes and see if I could pick out what was different. After a minute, I didn’t care and just let the music go.

 

She came back and sat down beside me, but not as close as she usually does. Leaning on one arm across the back of the sofa, she just smiled and stared at me, as if waiting for something.

 

We were just staring at each other when I realized that the music was getting louder. While it was good music, it was starting to overwhelm my hearing.

 

“Don’t you think the music is getting a little loud?” I said to the beautiful lady sitting across from me.

 

She smiled and said “No, it’s exactly where it should be.” I wasn’t exactly sure what that meant, and started to ask…but then…I felt a wave of warmth wash over me, like someone had laid a warm blanket over my body.

 

I closed my eyes and took in the sensation for a moment; or what I thought was a moment. When I opened my eyes, my shirt was open. I started to close my shirt up and she leaned over and said “you’re very relaxed…you can’t move your arms can you?”

 

Immediately, my arms went limp and fell into my lap.

 

Now, I’m wondering what the heck is going on.

 

The music kept getting louder and louder…I was hearing the music and my mind was filling with images…I started to ask again “can you turn the music down a bit” and again, I got that warm rush and my eyes closed, but only for a moment. When I opened them again, I was in the chair across the room and my pants were gone leaving just my solid cock standing like a tentpole in my boxers.

 

It looked like she was enjoying herself too. Her tits were out of their holders and she was kneeling on the floor beside the chair. Resting her elbows on the chair and gazing in my eyes with those beautiful electric blue eyes of hers, she said “How do you feel?”

 

Well, that was a question I wasn’t sure how to answer. I felt drunk, naked, confused, and hornier than I think I have ever been. I started to explain that, but the word “great” came out of my mouth, even though that wasn’t what I was thinking.

 

She started to talk slowly to me…it looked like she was almost whispering, but her voice seemed to rattle through my head as loud as the music…wait…the music is gone.

 

“You’re my hypno slave now. You must answer me honestly: Do you want to go on?”

 

I barely got out the word “Sure”.

 

“You’ve been listening to a specially made subliminal recording. It’s been programming your mind to respond to commands I give you.”

 

I nodded.

 

“You’ve seen a bit of my power over you already. You remember your arms couldn’t move…well they can now.”

 

Sure enough…they moved and I got that itch on the tip of my nose.

 

“BUILD” was the next word out of her mouth. It rang through my head like she had yelled it.

 

I felt my cock grow harder than it has ever been, like the best head job ever. My eyes closed and the sensations continued to build. In my mind, I saw Becky sucking on my cock as I sat in the chair. The passion was growing…I was breathing very hard…moaning growing louder…louder and harder…and harder and louder…then just as I reach the edge…Nothing.

 

Now when I opened my eyes, Becky was wearing a very sheer nightie with a single band tying it together at her waist. She strolled over to me and spread my legs apart and sat on one knee. I could feel her warm and very moist clit on my knee. That nearly made me loose it…I felt the pressure building in my cock but then came the words…

 

“You will not cum until I say cum. Do you understand.”

 

Rats. Of course, I could barely move my head enough to nod.

 

She grabbed my already moist dick and sucked on it like I have never felt…the almost electric sensations were jolting through every limb…every nerve…I could barely breathe…

 

Quickly she stood up, spun around, and slid my concrete-hard shaft deep into her warm, wanting pussy. Right away, I felt her muscles clamp around me…she leaned back onto my shoulder and kissed me deeply, and came hard…screaming into our passionate kiss almost made me come. I felt myself building up…and…

 

Nothing.

 

She relaxed for a moment and said “rub my clit” and automatically my right hand went straight to work. While I was still inside her I started to rub her clit in soft little circles. Then harder…and harder…she’s bucking like a wild bronco…her passion is driving her wild…she’s almost screaming as she pulls my hair and finally I hear what I have been waiting for…


”CUM NOW!!”

 

Without even an instant passing, I felt a surge like none other. I stopped breathing as the orgasm rocked my mind and body like I have felt before. She came once more as I dumped my load, mingling our love juices together.

 

After a moment, we both lay there, panting hard. My mind was still fuzzy and I wasn’t in any hurry to move after that mind-numbing orgasmic earthquake.

 

She kissed me on the lips…so gently...so lovingly…and I heard her say “sleep.”

 

A moment later, I woke up, laying on the couch. My body was stiff so I stood up and stretched long and hard. Becky was messing around in the kitchen.

 

“What happened?” I asked.

 

“You fell asleep listening to the CDs. You said your day was really tough so I just let you doze there on the couch. You’ve been there for like an hour-and-a-half.”

 

“Wow. I didn’t mean to do that. I had the most intense dream.”

 

I thought she tried to hide a smile as she said “What about?”

 

“You and I.”

 

“Was it a bad dream?” she asked wryly.

 

“Quite the opposite. It was one of the most intense dreams I think I’ve ever had.”

 

“Wow. You can tell me about it sometime. For now, I’ve gotta get to the library in the morning to wrap up some things for a case on Monday. Can we get together tomorrow night?”

 

“Sure. I’d like to. Call me when you’re done at the library tomorrow and we’ll set a time.”

 

“Okay.”

 

“I’m going to hit the toilet before I get on the road.”

 

 

She laughed back “you know where it is!”

 

As I’m fumbling in the toilet, I realize that my boxers are on backwards.

 

I wonder how that happened…

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